Demi Ability

Name: Geizomyr


Family: Gravity

Physical Enhancement

Description:

Spoiler:

Ability:

Geizomyr has the ability to create and control small sized voids around the circumference of average sized baseballs that usually stay in close proximity to the user. The voids individually are considerably weak so they are primarily used in unison. The voids have the ability to expel vacuum like winds from other dimensions and vacuum in things from the present dimension into random empty dimensions in a whirlwind like fashion. The voids cannot vacuum in people as their circumference is too small but what they can do is vacuum in any form of energy from attacks to lessen damage but they cannot engulf whole attacks. However energy that is vacuumed in is stored in a separate dimension and can be used as a fuel source to strengthen attacks and defenses or used for other tasks such as moderately enhanced movement or even short term flight. The vacuum like winds that expel from the voids are highly concentrated and very powerful making them a formidable offense. The maximum amount of voids that can be created is 20 and the voids can not do damage or harm to the user in anyway.


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Techniques:

Techniques:
Name: Vaccum Respiration
Effect: Demi disperses a group of voids around the vicinity that will perpetually rotate around the area. Half of the group of voids will expel vacuum winds while the others will use their vacuum winds as an inward suction. This will create a dense confliction of positive and negative currents that will cause a great decline in enemy movement speed and the speed of their attacks while the currents supply the user with enhanced speed and agility for his movements and attacks. The vacuums range is a radius of 50 yards and a diameter of 100 yards.
Duration: 2 posts. Cooldown: 3 posts

Name: Dimension Shift
Effect: This technique allows the user to combine all of his voids to create a single-person travel dimensional void that can transport the user from one point to another at high speeds in a fashion similar to shunpo/sonido.
Duration: 1 post. Cooldown: 2 posts

Will make third later.

(1) Because you are a regular, you only get one family.

(2) If you want the energy absorbed into another dimension to increase your power it can only be for one post, and you must explain HOW it enhances your ability since it is in another dimension.

(3) With everything that the voids can do, tone them down to a maximum of 5 in a single post, and with a one post cooldown, and a duration for how long they are open. 20 is just too much to deal with, and can get overly confusing.

(4) Give more detail on your first tech. Explain how it increases your speed and whatnot.

(5) This is important. Because you have chosen to use the gloves as a focuser, if they should come off your powers go away. It's not permanent, but if they come off (and yes, they can come off if someone manages to do it in a logical way) you will not have access to your powers. If only one of them comes off your powers will only be half as effective.

Make these edits and we can go from there.